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GA Review

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Reviewer: The Flash {talk} 01:47, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Yello! Saw this at GAN and I'd love to assist WP:SP on their FT project, so I'll be reviewing this article. Looks good but I do have a number of small concerns. Check out Talk:I Married Marge/GA1 for my structural system in reviews, and let's get started. The Flash {talk} 01:47, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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Plot summary

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Production

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Theme

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Cultural references

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Reception

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Images

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  • All 3 images are fine; the infobox image has a very weak rationale though, so can you beef it up at all? Just a passing mention of the animation process would even be suitable.
  • Can you change the caption for the infobox image? It's rather....lackluster, ya know?

Final say

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GA review (see here for criteria)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS):
    There's still an awkward and abrupt transition between "Wendy reclaims Stan as her boyfriend" and "Wendy speaks with the Iraqi men in fluent Arabic and pays them with a wad of American money."
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
    IMDb link in Ref 19 is throwing it all off; I'd suggest removing the link entirely.
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
    Needs those two things fixed, but other then that looking great. Fix those and I'll pass this. Cheers, The Flash {talk} 23:58, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I've gone ahead and passed it. Great work, The Flash {talk} 01:15, 16 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]